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endlessfuneral2003

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PostSubject: No Escape   Wed Nov 21, 2007 9:53 pm

New Endless Funeral lyrics for a fast thrash song (a la old Living Sacrifice) :-)


NO ESCAPE

I have faced judgment
For my offenses
I've been found guilty
on all charges

There is no escape
From this place of torment
I have brought it
Upon myself!


How could I be so blind
To the grace?
How could I take it all
For granted?

Now there is no more time
To regret
I have reaped all that
I have sown!


You see my friend
We are all condemned
We are all sinners
Driven to the slaughter

But there is a price
Our works can't suffice
Our ways are wicked
Ruin lies ahead


But there's someone who
Took the pain for us
He is God above
In the flesh

He will not ever
Force you to love Him
He lets You the choice
to decide
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PostSubject: Re: No Escape   Thu Nov 22, 2007 12:35 am

endlessfuneral2003 wrote:
But there's someone who
Took the pain for us
He is God above
In the flesh

He will not ever
Force you to love Him
He lets You the choice
to decide

AMEN!!

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PostSubject: Re: No Escape   Thu Nov 22, 2007 11:38 am

thats really cool dude
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PostSubject: Re: No Escape   Thu Nov 22, 2007 5:42 pm

Smile
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PostSubject: Re: No Escape   Sat Nov 24, 2007 8:55 am

Great words with a great message, Martin. Keep writing what God lays on your heart.

Now, for some "productive criticism". Let's take a look at that last verse:

Quote :
He will not ever
Force you to love Him
He lets You the choice
to decide

That last line sounds a little like "Engrish". You might want to word it like this:

Quote :
He GIVES you the choice

to decide

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